I like this drawing and also the quote. But the typography doesn't fit with the work. It disturbs a little because its just put on it. It's not integrated in the image. Maybe you you find the time to work over it, like you did in older pictures, where the typography is part of the image?
They are the characters of me and my boyfriend, the ones the play in World of Warcraft when we roleplay. The man is a deadly, cold hearted assassin and the girl is a street kid taken in to be trained by him. The quote was something my boyfriend came up with in the middle of the night at Edinburgh airport Happy to hear you like it!